The 2 screenplays have progressed nicely and in many ways are going better than expected. I keep coming up with new elements to add which hopefully improve them.
But I’m still having a problem with the length. A 60 minute programme should actually be around 50 minutes (to allow for adverts and promos for other shows) and mine are both stuck around the 40 minute mark. And I don’t know how to extend them.
I already HAVE extended them by adding new scenes but obviously, the scenes need to be good and not lose the momentum. And anything I add now just feels like filler, which is not good.